White Rabbit

Ooo... creepy. This was a nice little piece. Nitpicks: "It’s no concern of your’ mother’s" should be "It’s no concern of your mother’s" and "she chopped off it's head" should ...

This was a work inspired by the relationship between Charles Dodgson(Lewis Carroll) and the young, Alice Liddell. I lure you in with cakes and wine All I need is for ...

Of deepest blues, and somber grays Out his window, a little boy did gaze A meadow far across the land A mass of blossoms filled it’s span Such sweet aromas ...

A hallucinated narrative Misery with no comparative Be warned of such a saddening feature A tale of a subtle creature A gloomy thing, so meek, and small A little If, ...

It was in a place not so much darker than the place prior to. This of which I speak was by some to be terrible, to others it was immoral, ...

I LOVE this statement, and the title with the poem works famously.

Respectable, yet it feels a little un-original.

I felt like this might be a Kingdom Hearts, although I still got that glossy Anime feeling.